Dark Thoreau
Those of us who are readers and admirers of Thoreau have to find ways to come to terms with the less likable aspects of his life and work. For me, those aspects include the stilted, bookish passages in the early Journal, most of the poetry, and much of what Thoreau wrote about the Irish, about the need for purity, and about friendship, for which (though he did have good friends) he maintained impossibly high standards.
Some of these matters are taken up in the 1982 book Dark Thoreau by Richard Bridgman, who has read Thoreau closely and often intelligently. But along with Thoreau’s genuine shortcomings, Bridgman sets up a number of hoary old straw men and proceeds to beat them vigorously.
It is generally accepted, he writes in his preface, “that Thoreau is the rhetorically powerful advocate both of the supreme value of the individual and of the benign glory of nature ... but to verify these ideas in Thoreau one must read him very selectively.”
True enough. But the clever placement of the words “supreme” and “benign” gives Bridgman free rein to attack Thoreau whenever he suggests that the individual is not supreme, or that nature is not benign. Dark Thoreau reads not so much like an attempt to add shading and dimension to our understanding of a great writer, but an attempt to blast him from his pedestal. Bridgman has a gimlet eye for every contradiction, or apparent contradiction, in Thoreau’s work. He fails to understand, or professes not to understand, a couple of basic points:
1. Thoreau is grappling with some of the most complicated questions of how we should live and how we should relate to nature and society. He is quite deliberately examining these issues from a variety of points of view. To demand simple, consistent positions is, to say the least, unreasonable. Thoreau could defend himself in the same words that Whitman did: “Do I contradict myself? Very well, then I contradict myself, I am large, I contain multitudes.”
2. Many of Thoreau’s more high-flown statements, especially in Walden, are aspirational. They do not reflect Thoreau’s sober assessment of himself, nor do I imagine he ever thought anyone would claim that they did.
As I have argued myself, Bridgman finds that Thoreau often writes better in his Journal than when he reworks entries as tiles in the mosaic of a larger work: “In his revisions, Thoreau tended not to rewrite much ... but to change a word here and there, not necessarily for the better, and to eliminate phrases and sentences until his original version was weakened or beclouded.”
But in other ways, Bridgman is jaw-droppingly wrong. He greatly overemphasizes Thoreau’s desire for solitude (though Thoreau concentrated in his Journal on observations of nature, there are still enough encounters with neighbors to fill the book Men of Concord). And he writes, “Winter was especially attractive to Thoreau,” a statement belied by many passages on the bleakness of the season, and an almost-obsessive hunt for hints that spring might come at last.
Bridgman does, though, come up with a unified explanation for a number of the subjects that made Thoreau (and continue to make his readers) a little uneasy.
My argument here has been that much of Thoreau’s twisting obscurity was due to his inability to come to terms with the quite powerful feelings that were tormenting him; that he tended to associate the soft, wet, and messy with moralists, slaughtered animals, and women, and to experience revulsion when confronting them; and that although Thoreau’s suppressed and confused sexual feelings sometimes discovered an outlet, more often they did not, whereupon they turned to animus; and finally that Thoreau’s inability to reconcile these feelings in turn bore on his conception of the world, producing aggressiveness sometimes, sometimes melancholy.